Just one thing make sure you are including all the features of a style of writing. You have correctly used an opening salutation (dear diary) and written in first person and detail but you forgot two important features: the date and writing in past tense. Bare that in mind for when you are next writing a diary entry.
Can I also ask that you try to make sure that your writing is always presented as neatly as possible and that there are no crossings out.
Good work young lady.
Just one thing make sure you are including all the features of a style of writing. You have correctly used an opening salutation (dear diary) and written in first person and detail but you forgot two important features: the date and writing in past tense. Bare that in mind for when you are next writing a diary entry.
Can I also ask that you try to make sure that your writing is always presented as neatly as possible and that there are no crossings out.
Miss Nicols (“,)