I must say I am disappointed with what you have produced for this lesson.
Your date and WALT have not been written correctly.
You have started one of your answers on the top line – sharing the line with the date.
Does the month say January or February?
You have not written in full sentences and your sentences do not begin with a captial letter. It looks as though you didn’t even start Tristan with a capital T.
Can you redo this, so that you are meeting the success criteria.
I must say I am disappointed with what you have produced for this lesson.
Your date and WALT have not been written correctly.
You have started one of your answers on the top line – sharing the line with the date.
Does the month say January or February?
You have not written in full sentences and your sentences do not begin with a captial letter. It looks as though you didn’t even start Tristan with a capital T.
Can you redo this, so that you are meeting the success criteria.
Miss Nicols (“,)
Sorry Miss Nicols, I’ve posted a corrected one now.