So today i woke up due to a load of noise coming from outside my bedroom window so i peak out of it to see a horrific sight people were slaughtered but they wernt familiar then remembered it was a war of us Britannia vs the scotts so i was relived then i went to my dad who just came back from war gave me a wolf fang necklace later we had lunch and we ate pig and potato and drunk cow milk than we went to a nearby village for bread 3 hours later we had dinner and it was delicious baked potato bacon bread and cabbages next i went to bed and fell asleep .
Thank you for sharing your work although I must say that this is all one long sentence. You have only use one full stop and that is at the very end of your writing.
Some questions for you:
What is wrong with the title of your blog post?
What type of ‘i’ are you supposed to use when talking about yourself?
Can you please edit your work, so that it is more than just one sentence?
Miss Nicols (“,)